Wednesday 16 April 2014

Show Don't Tell



My Reflection
This is my Show Don't Tell story.I could  not use I felt Or I feel in my story I had to show but don't tell.I found this tricky because this was my first time writing this Show don't  tell story.Next time I should put more  show don't tell sentence's.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I think the number of 'shows' you used is perfect. I can clearly imagine how excited you felt doing this activity. Fabulous writing Sophia!