Show Don't Tell

My Reflection
This is my Show Don't Tell story.I could  not use I felt Or I feel in my story I had to show but don't tell.I found this tricky because this was my first time writing this Show don't  tell story.Next time I should put more  show don't tell sentence's.

Understanding a Character's Impact

My Reflection
I was learning to understand the characters impact on the story.
I felt challenged about this learning.
The thing that helped me the most was bouncing idea's from my friends.
My next step would be to use there same idea's when I read other books.
In this work I was writing as one of the characters.